Cold
wind whistled through the ice-covered trees. The branches clinked together,
sounding like hundreds of little wind chimes. I shivered and wrapped my arms
tightly around me, trying to keep out the cold. The flannel coat I wore for protection
did little more than give my hands something to grab. Snow drifts covered the
ground and were lit up with the blue light from the moon. A dark shadow passed
over the ground. Gasping, I whirled and looked up, only to see a solitary owl silhouetted
against the moon. I watched as he flew further into the trees until I could see
him no more. A sharp squeal came from the direction he had flown and I knew he’d
found his prey.
Trudging
forward, I stumbled on the slick surface. Ice covered most of the snow, making
it nearly impossible to walk on. At least my feet are somewhat dry. The
forest began to get more and more dense as I walked forward. Soon, I could no
longer see much light. Little beams let their way through the tangle of ice
covered branches. Occasionally, the light reflected off several ice covered
limbs at once, making them look like Christmas lights.
This might be going into a short-story-turned-novel-that-needs-planned that I'm working on for an English class. No, the assignment is not to write a novel. I'll submit a short story and probably turn it into a novel afterwards. I have trouble doing short things. :P
O_O You're pretty much doing exactly what my dad told me to do. Take a scene and focus just on description. Really good!
ReplyDeleteIt's a great idea. It's really helpful just to focus on description instead of a million other things going on in a story at the same time. Thank you!
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