Saturday, March 2, 2013

"Oh, I have to plan?"--The Importance of Planning




One of the few things that I’d rather not do when writing is plan. Seems silly, I know, but the initial “dirty work” isn’t my favorite part. Sure, I like figuring out some things like the plot, but I’d rather just plunge ahead with the story and write it. What’s the problem with that?

May seem like an obvious answer, but even though I’ve learned that I NEED to plan things, I still ask that question. As a writer, you may think that you know every piece of your story (and I’m not saying that you don’t), but sometimes that isn’t the case. You need to write down what’s going to happen and sort of “see” it, rather than have it just in your mind. I’ve found it’s very helpful to me to write things out. I don’t mean just typing them out, although I’ve been doing that more. The act of writing and forming the letters—the words, sentences, paragraphs—cements something in your mind in a way not possible with typing. This is where an outline or overview (post coming on that soon…) really helps.

Even if you don’t fully outline your novel, you always want to know where you’ll end up—your story goal. I heard something once that it’s the beginning and end of something that people remember. Think about some place that you drive to often, maybe church or the store. Now you may be able to picture the entire route, but the beginning point and end point are clearer, yes? It’s the same way with a story. People remember most what’s at the beginning, but especially the end. 



It’s so much easier to write towards a goal than just come up with it as you go along. By having a set goal, you as the author are more motivated to see it achieved. That in turn (hopefully) makes your characters more motivated to achieve the actual goal.

Several novels ago, I decided that I didn’t need to actually have a set story goal. I thought that I could figure it out as I went along. That novel ended up being a complete disaster. My characters weren’t motivated at all, weren’t very developed and the story bounced all over the place. Things happened for the sake of happening while I racked my brain to find a story goal. When I finally got to the end, it didn’t work. The goal didn’t feel real and that’s because I didn’t have it in mind (and my characters didn’t either).

Another thing I would suggest when you’re planning your novel is to get feedback from others. This helps me so much, probably the most of anything I try to do in the process. The author is so close to their story world and much of the time, we tend to “zoom in” on one aspect: a specific scene, a character—you name it. When we get feedback from others who aren’t so close to the story, it helps you to see the bigger picture. They can point out plot holes that you may have missed or inconsistencies. Getting at least a second opinion—generally more than that—is something I try to do before I start writing a story. Let the people willing to help you give some advice.



I know I’ve mentioned this before, but it seems important enough that I need to reiterate it again. Don’t let fear stop you. A lot of the time, that’s what holds me back from sending an overview or an excerpt to someone who would otherwise be able to give me a great critique. I’ll admit, I AM afraid to be laughed at sometimes. As hard as it is, (try to) forget about it. Attach the file and hit the send button. Now yes, I know that’s easier said than done. The feeling I get before I send part of my writing off sometimes is what I think I might feel if I were setting off a bunch of nuclear weapons.

Nuclear weapons...I may have to use that in a story.
If you only take one thing away from this post, then remember this: always know where you’re going with a story. The characters may be underdeveloped, the plot lacking, but having an endpoint in mind will make it easier to go back and rewrite. Don’t do what I did and think it’ll just come on its own. In some cases it may. But play it safe and make sure you know where you’re going. It will help you in the long run.

Keep writing!
~Katie

Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Writing...even when you don't feel like it.


I know the feeling all too well. I get my coffee, a glass of water and get nice and comfortable on the couch. Occasionally I’ll even sit at the table too. All psyched up, I open my computer and click on the document for my novel. Instantly, all excitement fades. It’s replaced by something akin to dread. The words on the screen start to look like either a foreign language or something a five-year old scribbled. This usually results in me acquiring a cause of the ‘author blues’ or placing my head in my hands and convincing myself that I’m a horrible writer and the scourge of the author world.




Okay, maybe that’s a bit extreme.

All writers suffer from writer’s block and the author blues at some point in their life. Both of the things I tend to automatically do are obviously not what one should do in this situation. But what DO you do?

I was reading an article about horse training lately (yes, this relates to writing, I promise). Our pony sometimes refuses to go forward, instead planting his feet in one spot and staying there. Something I read by a famous trainer said this, “Sometimes a horse will refuse to go forward because they’re trying to tell you something. They’re trying to say, ‘hey, I need a refresher on the basics!’. They could also be warning you that the next step will be explosive…and not in a good way.” 



If you feel like you can’t (or refuse to) move forward, then go back and look at the basics. I don’t mean go back to your first grade English curriculum and start from square 1. Look at the big picture of your writing—your outline or overview. Read it out loud, get some input from others, act it out. Do whatever you need to do to make it real to you. I’ve found that if I start talking to someone about troubles I’m having with my story, they tend to have some advice and I’m able to see the bigger picture. Sometimes you’re just so close to your story that you can’t see anything else. Instead of zooming in and focusing on just a certain chapter or scene, go back to the outline and figure out your plot holes. It may seem basic, but it really goes a long way.

Schedule your writing time and stick to it. Make an appointment with yourself and honor it just as you would a dentist appointment, a get-together or a lunch. You’re a writer. Writers write, so you need to make time for it every day.

Write something completely off-the-wall crazy. I’m working on a short story right now about someone with a phobia of lampshades. The idea came from my sleep deprived, running-on-coffee-and-sugar self a few nights ago while talking to a friend. I was incredibly loopy and out of it and couldn’t focus on anything serious (like my novel). Any kind of writing is useful, whether it be something nutty like I did or a blog post or a letter to someone. Just get the creative juices flowing. Writing is like any other skill. You have to practice to get better at it. It doesn’t just develop overnight.



My last tip is to avoid beating yourself up. It doesn’t help you at all, even though it seems that it may get you more motivated. In my experiences (and those of a few author friends), it does exactly the opposite—it harms you. One of the biggest things that stops anyone from progressing in a creative field is fear. The fear of rejection. The fear of being laughed at. The fear of not being good enough. Don’t dwell on those things. Actually, what would be really good is to chop the fears to pieces, burn the pieces to ash, and then dump the ash in a river somewhere. 



Remember, the author is always the harshest critic of their own work. Throw your fears out the window and keep pressing on. You’ll get better if you keep practicing. So, write.

Monday, January 14, 2013

Thoughts on Editing.

I started editing my NaNoWriMo novel, One Thirty-Six, on Sunday. It's been going well so far, but it's definitely a much more grueling process than writing. Tearing apart your own work multiple times can get not only boring, but also discouraging.



This evening, I rewrote one of the major turning points of my novel. Most of the reason is that it was too "nice", if you know what I mean. There wasn't enough conflict and it was much too clean. The scene takes place in a Civil War hospital tent and those weren't necessarily nice places to be. It was reeking, there were amputations and surgeries going on...not to mention the rising pile of amputated limbs outside. I went back through and made my character feel more shocked and confused at being in such a situation--after all, he's from the 21st century and thinks it's all a reenactment. Why wouldn't he be confused?

I'm trying to get this novel edited in time for a contest that I'd like to enter, but frankly, I'm not sure I'll be done in time. The deadline is exactly 13 day away and I'm only halfway through Chapter 3. I have 16 more to go and that's assuming I don't add anything.

Even if I don't get to enter the contest, I think it's good that I'm forcing myself to work on this. I have a deadline and I tend to function much better when I have a deadline or a goal I'm working towards. And, if nothing else, I'll have draft #2 of One Thirty-Six when I'm finished, instead of just my raw, rough draft.

Some quotes from today:
"I glanced at my rescuer. He has a beard. I want a beard." --Eli/Elijah Walker, Chapter 3

"I stumbled forward as best I could, dizzy and weak form the loss of blood. Black started to play at the edges of my vision. Someone in the background screamed “Retreat!” Oh, what a lawsuit they’re going to have. Black started to play at the edges of my vision and I drifted into nothingness."--Chapter 3


"     She stared at me, bewildered. “Eye-bee-pro-fin?” she sounded out the word. “I’m sorry, but I don’t know what you’re talking about. I’ve never heard of that before.”
     My mouth dropped open in shock, but I quickly closed it again. “You don’t know what ibuprofen is?”
     “No, sir. I am sorry.”
     I’ve been shot and she insists keeping up this act? “Okay, knock the act off. Look, you’re doing a lovely job of keeping in character and everything, but this has gone too far. I want to go to a real hospital, I want real pain medicine that everyone knows about and I want everyone around here to stop acting!” my voice had risen to a shout at this point."--Eli and nurse dialogue, Chapter 3 (my personal favorite part)