Thursday, November 29, 2012

The End.

Total word count: 50,024
Words written today: 2, 235

As I promised, today is the winning post! I finished my novel about 5 minutes ago.



The month went by a lot faster than I thought. Honestly, I'm glad it's over. It's hard to write tons of words every day. I will miss writing every day though. Even though my novel isn't perfect and won't be for a long time, I've really grown to love my characters. I was teary eyed when I wrote my final chapter and it's not even sad. I'm teary-eyed now too...hm, maybe I should go to bed. It's probably my lack of sleep for 28 days that's done this.

I want to say CONGRATS to everyone who has done NaNoWriMo this year. Even if you didn't get to 50,000 words, it's a huge accomplishment to write so many words in a month. If you're not finished yet, you've still got tomorrow! You can do it, guys!

And with this, I close my NaNoWriMo blog posts for this year. I'm going to go to bed now and enjoy not worrying about a word count.

Chazak Amats!
Katie

P.S. I'll probably start blogging about the first round of editing before long, so stay tuned!






Wednesday, November 28, 2012

NaNoWriMo Update for the past week.

Total word count: 47,790
Words written since 11/26: 5,710

I haven't really been posting much the past few days. Obviously. I've been a little busy preparing for the SAT  on Saturday, so that's taken priority over blog posts.

Novelling is going quite well. I am almost finished with the rough draft and know exactly where I need to go. I'll probably get to 50,000 words tomorrow, but the novel won't be quite finished by then. I think the finished thing (this time around, anyways) will be around 52,000 words. When I go back and edit, it will get longer. There are lots of description things I need to add and lots of historical facts.

The most interesting thing that has happened in my novel recently is that my MC kidnapped the villain. I'm not entirely sure how realistic it is, but it was at least smooth to write. Again, something to fix in editing.

Almost finished! Hopefully tomorrow will be the "winning" blog post.
There is a light at the end of the tunnel!
~Katie

Friday, November 23, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 23

Total Word Count: 37,025
Words Written Today: 2,731

Quote: "Are you crazy, Walker?”
            I shrugged again. “Maybe. Those are my terms. Do you agree?” - Dialogue between Charles and Eli, Chapter 11.


Writing this week has been kind of touch-and-go with Thanksgiving being in the middle of the week. I was starting to get really down about my book. It's really frustrating sometimes to just keep writing and writing and feeling like you have no idea what you're doing. And of course, it doesn't help that I like things to work out right the first time. I'm getting over that though. 




Today I went to the library from 3:30-6:00. I did some schoolwork and then started writing. Since I was short of ideas on how to move on, I started writing out what the Inciting Incident, Embracing Destiny, Black Moment and Showdown moments in my novel were. As I started writing all these, ideas for how to keep going came.

This morning I was sure that the only way to keep writing the novel was to end it. It really didn't seem like there was anything else I could do. Thankfully, that is not the case! I came up with a workable idea that should hopefully show some more conflict between the villain and the MC before I bring the story to a close.

I hope you all had a lovely Thanksgiving! And if you went Black Friday shopping and are reading this, I'm glad you didn't get trampled and killed.

Chazak Amats!
Katie

Tuesday, November 20, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 20

Total word count: 32,913
Words written today: 2,895

Quote: "Investigation time. Again." - Eli Walker.

Today is my first day writing since Friday. It went pretty well, considering. I wasn't too far behind, so it was easy to catch up.

I've gotten to a point in my novel where I'm not really sure what's supposed to happen next. I know exactly where I need to end up, and even some events that happen immediately prior, but I'm not there yet. I think I'm probably more than 20,000 words away. That's exciting and kinda of depressing at the same time. It means this will be my longest novel yet, but it also means 20,000 more words. 

As usual, there are lots of things I'm seeing I'll need to go back and change, such as historical facts and what-not. 

This novel is my first time having a guy main character and it's not going as badly as I expected it to. Some of what he does probably isn't very realistic, but I think some of it is. I suppose we'll see what my awesome critiquers think.

I wrote out how one of the "travel mechanisms" in my book works today and I started coming up with ideas for more. Who knows? Maybe I can come up with something else involving mental travel. I think that would be pretty awesome.

At this point, only 9 days left. If I want to get to 50,000, I only have 17,000 more words to write. That's only 1,888 per day. Shouldn't be too bad.

Chazak Amats!
~Katie

Friday, November 16, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 16 (This is the month that never ends!)

Total Word Count: 30,018
Words written today: 5,006

I passed the 150 page/30,000 mark today!

Eli has mostly figured the important things out at this point. There isn't a lot of mystery now, but there are a few things that I'm planning to leave hanging until the end.


I need to get some conflict going in the next few scenes. Although I did just add another fist fight. I've really got to stop with these. I don't know why, but that just seems like the easiest way for the villain to be nasty. Kind of silly, when you think about it. I'll come up with something more interesting to do next time.

It's really encouraging to see how much I've grown in my skill as a writer since I last did NaNoWriMo. I'm now at the 30,018 point. I didn't reach this word count two years ago until the 26th. I'm hope 10 days from now, I'll be over the 50,000 mark.

I'm looking forward to the end of the month now. I'm really starting to get tired. Of course, it could be my lack of sleep working as well. Ah, forget sleep. I'll just write. I can do 14 more days of this.

~Katie

Thursday, November 15, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 15 (Halfway done!)

Total word count: 25,102
Words written today: 2,280

Woo-hoo! Halfway done with the month!


However, I'm not halfway done with my novel. I'm getting close, but there is no way this story is going to end in 25,000 more words.

Eli finally starts figuring some important things out in the chapters I've written. This is moving the story along nicely, although I'm going to have to fix up some things with dialogue to make it flow better. I put in another fist fight, so I have to go back and make sure that's realistic.

I've also decided my story begins much too slowly. There is an exciting (or, it will be exciting after editing) scene in the beginning and then a couple more things, but I feel like I've just been "telling" for the past chapter . Some things do just need to be told I guess.

At the beginning of the month, I wasn't sure if I'd make it to the halfway point. I was pretty sure I'd be burnt out by now. Just the opposite though! Still going strong. I can do 15 more days of this. Hopefully that isn't my tiredness and slightly brain-dead self being over-confident.

~Katie

Wednesday, November 14, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 14

Total word count: 22,822 (I think it's cool how there is an 8 right in the middle...okay, maybe I'm a bit weird.)
Words written today: 2,007

I'll probably be writing more this evening, but since my posts have tended to be a little late, I thought I'd just play it safe and post now.

My story literally wrote itself today. I just word-warred with someone and did 2007 words in 45 minutes. We were both shocked after I counted them up. I was sort of dreading starting to write today, but as soon as I got into it, I had a hard time stopping.

So my writerly tip for today is to just start writing if you want to beat writer's block. I borrowed that from an article a good friend wrote for Kingdom Pen (which everyone should go subscribe to NOW if you're not already). It seems kind of obvious, but seriously, just sit down and start plunking out some words. It might not be the best thing you've ever written, but it gets the juices flowing.

I also decided today that no one will be reading this novel until I edit it. So, that will probably be Christmas time.


This guy looks like a character in my novel. Minus all of the science stuff.


My main character is going to start figuring out some of the mysteries I've planned, so the next chapters should be interesting. I also really want to add a sort of funny scene, but I don't have any idea how I'd do that yet. The character in the picture above and Eli would probably be the two who have the funniest interactions. Maybe something that has to do with...oh, I can't tell you that yet.

Chazak Amats!
~Katie

Tuesday, November 13, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 12

Total word count: 20,815
Words written yesterday: 3,815

Things are going well at the moment. My story has sort of started to write itself. I found something interesting to put into my novel the other evening during researching and I think that's helped out a lot.

I've also discovered I have the problem of forgetting to check my chapter lengths. I just keep writing and writing and before long, I have a 6,000 word chapter. So, I've had to go back and cut down on the length.

I have some exciting news as well. I (finally) reached 100 pages/20,000 words!!

~Katie

Sunday, November 11, 2012

The Baltimore Plot

I was searching for the layout of Washington DC in 1861 this evening and I found something else.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baltimore_Plot

"The Baltimore Plot was an alleged conspiracy in late February 1861 to assassinate President-elect Abraham Lincoln en route to his inauguration. Allan Pinkerton, founder of the Pinkerton National Detective Agency, played a key role by managing Lincoln's security throughout the journey. Though scholars debate where or not the threat was real, clearly Lincoln and his advisors believed that there was a threat and took actions to ensure his safe passage through Baltimore, Maryland."

I'm thinking of incorporating this into my novel. Perhaps having my main character and the ally figure out something about the plot and try to stop the person behind it. The ally might even be related to the evil conspirator...still need to think about that.

Needless to say, I'm getting WAY more energized about my novel.

If I had more energy, I would be dancing excitedly like this alligator.

~Katie



NaNoWriMo - Day 10

Total word count: 17,000
Words written yesterday: 3,000

This post is a bit late. I didn't have the time to write it up until now and my computer was dead. So, that made it a little tough.

As most of you probably know from my "Destination: Fairlawn" post, we were in the car all day yesterday. I managed to get 3,000 words written, mostly due to the fact that my sister and I managed to blow a fuse on the power adapter. Dad bought a new fuse today, so I should be able to write more tomorrow.

I started using my outline again and my book is going SO much better than the end of last week. I will not be straying from my outline ever, ever again...I hope. We'll have to see what the rest of the month brings.

Tomorrow my plan is to write AT LEAST 5,000 words. I'd like to get to 30,000 tomorrow, but that might be a little unrealistic. Although...it's a really long drive.



I'm not planning on writing today, but if I do, I'll try to blog about it.

Until tomorrow!
~Katie

Thursday, November 8, 2012

Make Your Slitted Denim Skirt Modest!

My little sister got a skirt from the thrift store today that had two knee-high slits on either side. My Mom didn't realize it when she got the skirt and told my sister that she wasn't allowed to wear it unless I could add a panel in. After about 20 minutes of cutting, pinning and sewing she has this now adorably modest skirt!


This was really easy to do. I had an old denim skirt that was kind of weirdly made, so I decided to take out the lace inserts in it to put into my sister's skirt.


I cut a wide triangle around the lace so I had about an inch of excess fabric on either side to work with. I flipped my sister's skirt inside out and pinned the lace panels onto either side of the slit.



This isn't my sister's skirt (it's mine that I haven't sewn yet), but the same pinning applies. You can see from the picture how the pins are in a triangle--the same shape as the slit. Be careful when you're pinning so you don't pin both sides of your skirt together! That could get messy while sewing.

After you have your fabric pinned in, flip the skirt right side out.



Since this is a denim skirt, there are alright some guide lines for you to follow while sewing. Make sure you have dark blue thread and sew with both "right sides" facing out, keeping the yellow stitching on the edge of the slit in the middle of your presser foot.

This skirt is the same one picture above in the pinning picture. If you cut out a triangle panel (like I did with my sister's skirt) you'll be finished after the sewing step.

As I said, it took about 20 minutes to cut, pin and sew the panels, so it went together really quickly. Please comment if you have any questions. I'll probably be posting pictures of mine when I finish it.

Wednesday, November 7, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 7 (No, I didn't write today)

As the title says, I did not write today. I was a bad girl.

However, I DID go over my outline. I think I'm unstuck now! The two big planning things I have for this novel are a 1,500 word summary and then a list of the events that need to happen. I read over the list of events and figured out where I was stuck. Tomorrow (if I have a chance to write) should be a good day.

My writing tip for today: Outlines are useful things if you use them.


I thought this was funny. It pretty much described me yesterday. Except I was finished a riveting episode of Robin Hood. 

On a side note, I went to the library today and checked out quite a few books on the Civil War. I got one about the battle of Antietam, the First Battle of Bull Run, Civil War weapons, Soldier's lives in camp during the war and...I think there was something else. I can't remember the name of it though. :P


Chazak,
Katie

Tuesday, November 6, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 6 (Any volunteers?)

Total word count: 14, 553
Words written today: 1,805

I said at the beginning of NaNo that I'd be honest in my posts. So, I'm going to be honest. I really don't like my story right now. I'm pretty sure I just rambled for an entire chapter, so I'll be taking that out when I edit. I really need to look at my story outline again and see if I can figure out what's going wrong.

So, I was wondering if anyone would like to volunteer to write my novel for me!

Just kidding. I probably should just suck it up and finish. I mean, I've got 24 more days left. I can survive...right?

The plan for tomorrow (or whenever I have the chance to write again) is this (and in no particular order):
-Read over my outline again to figure out what's wrong
-Eat chocolate and drink coffee for motivation
-Listen to epic music
-Pray about it

I know every author probably thinks this, but I really think that--if I do it right--this novel has potential. So, I'm probably being harder on myself than I should.

I'm just going to keep reminding myself that December is now officially 'National Novel Editing Month'. NaNoEdMo.

Until tomorrow!
~Katie

Destination: Fairlawn, New Jersey


My Dad sent this email out last night to lots of people in our area. We will be leaving Saturday morning to drive to New Jersey to take food, water and warm clothing to the people who were affected by Hurricane Sandy. If you live in this area, please consider donating something (information on how to do so below). If you live in another state, please pray that we'll be able to take a good amount of things to these people and pray for the people affected by this.

Also, please pass this on to anyone in the Central Ohio area! We'll be accepting donations at our home until Friday evening. 

Thank you,
Katie
______________________________________________________

Central Ohio Friends:

As you know, Hurricane Sandy ravaged areas along the New York and New Jersey shore.  Residents have lost everything – homes, cars and all their possessions.  Many people are still without electricity and thus without heat, clean water or even the most basic of necessities – the temperatures are plummeting with nights below freezing.  The stores have been emptied and families could not even buy supplies if they were able – there just aren’t any left!  The sheer number of people affected along with lack of gasoline and public transportation has left many residents trapped with no way out and without needed supplies. 

I grew up in New Jersey and still have family in the area – this coupled with the images of suffering we’ve seen in the news has motived my family to action.  These people need our help!  They are regular people – just like you and me – just like your children and babies – just like your grandparents!  This evening, I spoke with my Aunt and her Pastor.  Pastor Boone is also a police officer and he said the devastation is more than you can understand or appreciate from TV.   He told me that access to the hardest hit areas is limited to only residents and relief crews.  A firehouse in Fairlawn, NJ is acting as a clearing house for donated items.  They then deliver the items by ambulance to the victims most in need of help.  We would like to take a box trailer full of items to the Fairlawn firehouse for distribution to the flood victims.  Because the needs are immediate, we plan to leave this Saturday November 10 to deliver the items on Sunday November 11. 

This is where you come in.  I have observed first hand that the businesses and residents in the Marysville and surrounding communities are very generous with their time and treasures.  We are greatly blessed here and my request to you is that you use some of those blessings to help us fill a trailer so we can help those in desperate need along the New Jersey shore.

Items needed are:
Food – non-perishable, easy-to-open, nutritious items
Peanuts and peanut butter
Raisins and dried fruit
Beef Jerky and dried meat products
Meal replacement bars
                Cases of water bottles
One gallon size and personal-sized
                Baby Supplies
                                Diapers – all sizes
                                Wipes
                                Premixed baby formula and bottles
                               Baby Food
New or clean used:
                                Blankets & Pillows
                                Coats, gloves, hats, sweatshirts, sweaters, warm socks, etc.
                Cold weather supplies
                                Hand-warmers, foot warmers, etc

I urge you to consider all the blessings you have at your disposal, including your warm dry bed and search deep for what you can do to help those who have lost everything.  Donations of supplies will be taken at our home all day Tue-Friday this week.  Please email Pam to arrange a time to drop-off supplies (pcomstock@clarityts.com).  Remember, we’ll be transporting these items in a trailer that we’d like to fill floor to ceiling.  Purchase water and food by the case whenever possible to make them easier to stack and pack.  Aldi is a great place to shop by the case – they have great prices and their cases are right there in the aisle for you to easily purchase.  If you have extra boxes to bring clothing and blankets in, please prepack those items and clearly mark the contents on the outside of the box.  If you have additional empty boxes, please bring those along for us to pack items that arrive unboxed.

If you’d prefer to donate cash and have us shop for you, please do so before noon on Friday.  We will go shopping Friday afternoon to purchase needed items at a local store.  Speaking of local stores, we encourage you to think outside the box when gathering supplies.  If you know of a local business owner who might be willing to donate items in their store to help the victims - please contact them.

To transport these items, I need to borrow or rent an enclosed trailer.  We’d prefer to borrow one so that there is more money available to buy supplies for the victims.  If you have a trailer we can borrow, please contact us.  We have a van that will tow 8,000lbs, so can handle a good-sized double-axle trailer.

We realize that to some this may seem like a short turnaround time to perform such a huge task of filling an entire trailer full of relief items.  We believe in miracles and are trusting in God and in the generosity of our community to fill the trailer that will provide relief and some practical help to the people who have been so devastated by this storm.

Please pass this note long as you see fit.

God Bless You All,

Jason Comstock and Family
jcomstock@clarityts.com / 614-306-0535

For there will never cease to be poor in the land. Therefore I command you, ‘You shall open wide your hand to your brother, to the needy and to the poor, in your land. (Deuteronomy 15:11)
“When the Son of Man (Jesus) comes in his glory, and all the angels with him, then he will sit on his glorious throne. Before him will be gathered all the nations, and he will separate people one from another as a shepherd separates the sheep from the goats. And he will place the sheep on his right, but the goats on the left. Then the King will say to those on his right, ‘Come, you who are blessed by my Father, inherit the kingdom prepared for you from the foundation of the world. For I was hungry and you gave me food, I was thirsty and you gave me drink, I was a stranger and you welcomed me, I was naked and you clothed me, I was sick and you visited me, I was in prison and you came to me.’ Then the righteous will answer him, saying, ‘Lord, when did we see you hungry and feed you, or thirsty and give you drink? And when did we see you a stranger and welcome you, or naked and clothe you? And when did we see you sick or in prison and visit you?’ And the King will answer them, ‘Truly, I say to you, as you did it to one of the least of these my brothers, you did it to me.’  (Matthew 25:31-40)

Monday, November 5, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 5

Total Word Count: 12,748
Words written today: 1,688

Today was a busy school day, so I didn't get as much done as I would have liked. At this point, I think Chapter 4 is a lot of quantity, but it doesn't have much quality. Because of that, I'm having a very hard time continuing with this, because I want it to be perfect the first go around. However, that's not realistic.

The good news it that I'm going to be getting to a (hopefully) more exciting part in the story soon. We'll see what tomorrow brings.

Chazak,
Katie

(I apologize for a short post. I'm a bit...distracted. Post coming on that either tonight or tomorrow morning. So, stay tuned.)

Sunday, November 4, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 4

Total word count: 11,060
Words written today: 1,039

There's really nothing too exciting to report from today. I took it easy after writing 4,000 words yesterday. I was SO exhausted this afternoon that I was considering taking a break. But, then I decided I should just make myself do it, so I did.

Eli got out of the hospital today. He's on crutches and he's kind of grumpy. I guess that's to be expected when it's after midnight, you have a leg wound and the whole town is talking about how you were injured and passed out in front of a crowd. Not to mention you're confused about...well...not to mention you're confused.

I've gotten to what the OYAN curriculum refers to as the 'Middle Cycle' and honestly, I'm not looking forward to it all that much. The middles of my books before have always been boring for me to write and because of that, are probably boring to the reader. I've got some events planned to happen and I think (I hope) enough mystery to make it more interesting. I might have to add some action when I go back to edit.

I'm still ahead of schedule according to the NaNoWriMo site. It says that if I continue at this rate (so, approximately 2,800 a day) I'll be done with the 50,000 by November 18th.

My evil Inner Editor is starting to get really annoying. I'm such a perfectionist sometimes. Maybe I'll duct tape it's mouth shut. Yes, I think I'll go do that now.

~Katie

Saturday, November 3, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 3

Total word count: 10,021
Words written today: 4,012

I passed the 10k mark today! Actually, I passed it about 5 minutes ago. I spent the entire evening writing and word warring with some good friends. Chapter 3 is the longest chapter now and my book is currently 50 pages long Microsoft Word.

Chapter 3 was a big chapter and very defining for the story as a whole. I laid out some of the mysteries that are going to be a big part of my novel. Oh, Eli also got wounded today. Yes, he's fine. He'll survive...most likely. 

I've not decided yet if I'll write tomorrow. I might be too tired. Then again...I'm having a hard time just letting this story sit on my laptop unwritten for a while. I took the SAT this morning and I'm pretty sure I came up with half the new ideas during the breaks.

Quote from the day:
(to give you a little bit of context, my MC got injured in the Civil War. He's talking to one of the nurses in this bit of dialogue).
"She stopped reading and looked up. “Yes, sir?” 
     “Do you have ibuprofen?”
     “Eye-bu-pro-fin?” she sounded out the word, bemused." --Nurse and Eli (MC), Chapter 3 of One Thirty-Six PM.

I almost forgot! Something else very exciting happened today! I came up with a working title. It's One Thirty-Six PM. Now, I'm not sure if I'll keep it, but at least I have something better than CWHF (yep, that stands for Civil War Historical Fiction. So creative.)

I'm thinking of getting some sleep now. Or maybe watching a movie. Ah well, doesn't matter.

Until tomorrow!
~Katie

Friday, November 2, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 2

Total word count: 6,009
Words written today: 2,758

2 days down, 28 to go! Today was awesome. I came to the library around 9:30, did a little bit of school and then got to some writing. I'm getting to more interesting part (at least, I think) in my story.

At 11, I went to my online Civil War class and we all talked about how expensive the war was.

I wrote pretty consistently this afternoon, with a break for some novel planning with a friend in between. I'm starting to get even more excited about this story than I was before.

Eli (Elijah) Walker, my main character.

 A word picture with the most commonly used words from my book (so far).

The pocketwatch Eli gets from Elijah Walker I.

In addition to my awesome writing, I found two books. One is a science fiction research guide for authors and the other is a Historical Fiction genre guide. I'm really looking forward to reading them. The funny thing is, I was sitting by the shelf they were on all day and didn't see them until about 1:45 PM.

Emily and I also had some interesting discussions about internet history and bodies falling from ceilings, trees, and the sky. The library workers probably think we're very strange now. Oh well.

Sadly, I have to take the SAT tomorrow morning, so that's going to cut into my writing time. Silly test. At least it won't take too horribly long to complete.

Auf Wiedersehen!
~Katie

Thursday, November 1, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 1

Total Word count: 3, 251 words

Today was both a good and bad day. I can't exactly judge it against any others since this is only day 1, however.
Wouldn't this be an awesome place to write?

So the bad part. I figured out that I have absolutely no clue how to write a fist fight. Zero, zilch...yeah, you get the picture. The first chapter opens with my main character getting beat up by some other guys. However, I'm not sure if they did too much talking or too little talking. Or for that matter, too much "fist throwing" or too little "fist throwing". I guess that's what my guy critiquers are for (thank you!).

I'm also starting to wonder (yeah, starting to wonder. It's the first day.) if my beginning is exciting enough. In the past I've always had fight scenes to open something off, but this is a little less exciting, at least I think so. Whoops, Eli (that's my main character, in case you were wondering) said to tell you that getting beat up is plenty "exciting".

I think I should try to turn my inner editor off.

The good part about today is that I had 1,500 words done before lunch. If the rest of the month goes like this, the word count feature on the NaNoWriMo site says I should be done with my 50,000 by November 17. We'll see if I can keep it up. :P I did an hour long word war with Julia (thanks so much!) and got up to 2,878 words. After that, I wasn't exactly sure of what to do next, so I went into town to get some bobby pins and decaf coffee (Mom said I shouldn't have caffeine). I ran into another WriMoer at Walmart and we talked for a bit (she had to get coffee too, except she is allowed to have caffeine) before heading back home.

This evening I wrote 350-ish more words and finished the first chapter. It's got to be the longest chapter I've ever written.

Tomorrow is a writing day, so I'm planning to write Chapter 2 and 3, or at least, most of 3.

I'm off to do a bit more planning and maybe watch a few episodes of Robin Hood.

Until tomorrow!
Katie