Monday, December 3, 2012

Sarah's Choice - Movie Review

I saw this move tonight when I was browsing Netflix and after reading the synopsis, decided it looked interesting. Netflix listed it as unrated so I check the Plugged In review first. The review said it was a fine movie and if it had been rated, probably would be PG-13. After watching it, I do agree with that.

The story focuses on a woman named Sarah Collins. She is a hard-working business woman who has just received the news that she is being considered for a promotion. She lives with her somewhat immature boyfriend Matt, who can't keep focused on his current job long enough to avoid many "get rich quick" ideas. Sarah and Matt finally think they know where they are going. That is, until she finds out she is pregnant.

Everyone is shocked, including Sarah's mother and sister. Her mother and sister both attend church and have been trying to get her to come back for years. Ever since their father died 10 years ago, Sarah blamed it on God and refused to return. From the moment she finds out she's pregnant, she starts saying "I will absolutely not have an abortion." She's shaken a bit from her belief however, when her colleague and close friend at work start telling her how it will ruin her entire career.

Eventually, Sarah has a break down. She doesn't know what to do and she can't wait around for Matt. He's too busy trying to figure out how to get rich quick and she "can't wait for him to grow up". Sarah's friend tells her that she needs to have an abortion. Unbeknownst to Sarah, this friend had one when she was just 16 years old. The guilt haunts her and as they are driving past an abortion clinic, they see pro-life supporters. The friend yells at them to stop making her feel guilty. That's when Sarah starts to realize this might be a bad decision.

It doesn't stop there, however. The story kind of reminded me of a Christmas Carol. After going to a hospital soon after she discovers she's pregnant, Sarah meets an older version of herself. She gives her a Christmas card and tells her that she'll see three visions. And that's just what happens. Over the next three nights, Sarah sees what will happen if she keeps the baby. One of the visions is when Sarah's daughter, Daisy, is about 6 years old. She wakes up early and makes breakfast for Sarah and then the two go sledding for her birthday. I think this is the vision that got Sarah going in the right direction.

Matt is struggling with what to do throughout this entire situation. He tells his uncle what's going on, discovering that his aunt and uncle married because they got pregnant. During this discussion, Matt's uncle says two of the best lines in the entire movie. "Love isn’t this thing that just sticks to certain people. Love is the result of fighting for a commitment YOU made. Love is never giving up, even when you just can’t go on any more," and, "You can have the great stuff (in marriage) but you only get it by going through the bad stuff. The great stuff is real."

Sarah has one more vision near the end of the movie. It's actually more like two of them combined into one. The first part shows her and Matt as grandparents. Their daughter and her husband come over, with a little baby of their own in tow. Sarah keeps asking Matt, "Are you glad we did it?" He eventually asks, "Glad we did what?" "Glad we got married," she replies. He smiles and kisses her on the forehead, then says, "Yes, I am."

It cuts to a nursing home. Sarah overhears a nurse talking to another Sarah Collins. She asks Ms. Collins if she has any family and she replies, "No, I'm all alone." The nurse smiles sadly and says that she's not alone--she's got all of us (the nursing home staff). The nurse leaves and the younger Sarah tries to talk to her, but she doesn't see her. She steps into the room and realizes that the lady who the nurse was just talking to is the same lady who gave Sarah her Christmas card. The older Sarah Collins tells Sarah not to have an abortion, and says that she did, which means she'll die alone.

The next day, Sarah marches into work to tell her boss that she's pregnant. This makes it so she doesn't get the promotion, but she decides to trust God, giving her life to Him and trusting that He has a plan for all this. Matt soon comes over and asks Sarah to marry him, promising that he'll never leave her side.

I wouldn't recommend the movie for someone under 12 or 13, just because of the subject matter it deals with. It's a wonderful story and it's easy to relate to the characters, even if you have never been through something like that. From the time you find out that Sarah is pregnant to the time she finally makes the decision to accept Christ into her life and keep the baby, you're rooting for her to do the right thing. And she eventually does, thanks to the many prayers of her mother and sister.


Thursday, November 29, 2012

The End.

Total word count: 50,024
Words written today: 2, 235

As I promised, today is the winning post! I finished my novel about 5 minutes ago.



The month went by a lot faster than I thought. Honestly, I'm glad it's over. It's hard to write tons of words every day. I will miss writing every day though. Even though my novel isn't perfect and won't be for a long time, I've really grown to love my characters. I was teary eyed when I wrote my final chapter and it's not even sad. I'm teary-eyed now too...hm, maybe I should go to bed. It's probably my lack of sleep for 28 days that's done this.

I want to say CONGRATS to everyone who has done NaNoWriMo this year. Even if you didn't get to 50,000 words, it's a huge accomplishment to write so many words in a month. If you're not finished yet, you've still got tomorrow! You can do it, guys!

And with this, I close my NaNoWriMo blog posts for this year. I'm going to go to bed now and enjoy not worrying about a word count.

Chazak Amats!
Katie

P.S. I'll probably start blogging about the first round of editing before long, so stay tuned!






Wednesday, November 28, 2012

NaNoWriMo Update for the past week.

Total word count: 47,790
Words written since 11/26: 5,710

I haven't really been posting much the past few days. Obviously. I've been a little busy preparing for the SAT  on Saturday, so that's taken priority over blog posts.

Novelling is going quite well. I am almost finished with the rough draft and know exactly where I need to go. I'll probably get to 50,000 words tomorrow, but the novel won't be quite finished by then. I think the finished thing (this time around, anyways) will be around 52,000 words. When I go back and edit, it will get longer. There are lots of description things I need to add and lots of historical facts.

The most interesting thing that has happened in my novel recently is that my MC kidnapped the villain. I'm not entirely sure how realistic it is, but it was at least smooth to write. Again, something to fix in editing.

Almost finished! Hopefully tomorrow will be the "winning" blog post.
There is a light at the end of the tunnel!
~Katie

Friday, November 23, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 23

Total Word Count: 37,025
Words Written Today: 2,731

Quote: "Are you crazy, Walker?”
            I shrugged again. “Maybe. Those are my terms. Do you agree?” - Dialogue between Charles and Eli, Chapter 11.


Writing this week has been kind of touch-and-go with Thanksgiving being in the middle of the week. I was starting to get really down about my book. It's really frustrating sometimes to just keep writing and writing and feeling like you have no idea what you're doing. And of course, it doesn't help that I like things to work out right the first time. I'm getting over that though. 




Today I went to the library from 3:30-6:00. I did some schoolwork and then started writing. Since I was short of ideas on how to move on, I started writing out what the Inciting Incident, Embracing Destiny, Black Moment and Showdown moments in my novel were. As I started writing all these, ideas for how to keep going came.

This morning I was sure that the only way to keep writing the novel was to end it. It really didn't seem like there was anything else I could do. Thankfully, that is not the case! I came up with a workable idea that should hopefully show some more conflict between the villain and the MC before I bring the story to a close.

I hope you all had a lovely Thanksgiving! And if you went Black Friday shopping and are reading this, I'm glad you didn't get trampled and killed.

Chazak Amats!
Katie

Tuesday, November 20, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 20

Total word count: 32,913
Words written today: 2,895

Quote: "Investigation time. Again." - Eli Walker.

Today is my first day writing since Friday. It went pretty well, considering. I wasn't too far behind, so it was easy to catch up.

I've gotten to a point in my novel where I'm not really sure what's supposed to happen next. I know exactly where I need to end up, and even some events that happen immediately prior, but I'm not there yet. I think I'm probably more than 20,000 words away. That's exciting and kinda of depressing at the same time. It means this will be my longest novel yet, but it also means 20,000 more words. 

As usual, there are lots of things I'm seeing I'll need to go back and change, such as historical facts and what-not. 

This novel is my first time having a guy main character and it's not going as badly as I expected it to. Some of what he does probably isn't very realistic, but I think some of it is. I suppose we'll see what my awesome critiquers think.

I wrote out how one of the "travel mechanisms" in my book works today and I started coming up with ideas for more. Who knows? Maybe I can come up with something else involving mental travel. I think that would be pretty awesome.

At this point, only 9 days left. If I want to get to 50,000, I only have 17,000 more words to write. That's only 1,888 per day. Shouldn't be too bad.

Chazak Amats!
~Katie

Friday, November 16, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 16 (This is the month that never ends!)

Total Word Count: 30,018
Words written today: 5,006

I passed the 150 page/30,000 mark today!

Eli has mostly figured the important things out at this point. There isn't a lot of mystery now, but there are a few things that I'm planning to leave hanging until the end.


I need to get some conflict going in the next few scenes. Although I did just add another fist fight. I've really got to stop with these. I don't know why, but that just seems like the easiest way for the villain to be nasty. Kind of silly, when you think about it. I'll come up with something more interesting to do next time.

It's really encouraging to see how much I've grown in my skill as a writer since I last did NaNoWriMo. I'm now at the 30,018 point. I didn't reach this word count two years ago until the 26th. I'm hope 10 days from now, I'll be over the 50,000 mark.

I'm looking forward to the end of the month now. I'm really starting to get tired. Of course, it could be my lack of sleep working as well. Ah, forget sleep. I'll just write. I can do 14 more days of this.

~Katie

Thursday, November 15, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 15 (Halfway done!)

Total word count: 25,102
Words written today: 2,280

Woo-hoo! Halfway done with the month!


However, I'm not halfway done with my novel. I'm getting close, but there is no way this story is going to end in 25,000 more words.

Eli finally starts figuring some important things out in the chapters I've written. This is moving the story along nicely, although I'm going to have to fix up some things with dialogue to make it flow better. I put in another fist fight, so I have to go back and make sure that's realistic.

I've also decided my story begins much too slowly. There is an exciting (or, it will be exciting after editing) scene in the beginning and then a couple more things, but I feel like I've just been "telling" for the past chapter . Some things do just need to be told I guess.

At the beginning of the month, I wasn't sure if I'd make it to the halfway point. I was pretty sure I'd be burnt out by now. Just the opposite though! Still going strong. I can do 15 more days of this. Hopefully that isn't my tiredness and slightly brain-dead self being over-confident.

~Katie

Wednesday, November 14, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 14

Total word count: 22,822 (I think it's cool how there is an 8 right in the middle...okay, maybe I'm a bit weird.)
Words written today: 2,007

I'll probably be writing more this evening, but since my posts have tended to be a little late, I thought I'd just play it safe and post now.

My story literally wrote itself today. I just word-warred with someone and did 2007 words in 45 minutes. We were both shocked after I counted them up. I was sort of dreading starting to write today, but as soon as I got into it, I had a hard time stopping.

So my writerly tip for today is to just start writing if you want to beat writer's block. I borrowed that from an article a good friend wrote for Kingdom Pen (which everyone should go subscribe to NOW if you're not already). It seems kind of obvious, but seriously, just sit down and start plunking out some words. It might not be the best thing you've ever written, but it gets the juices flowing.

I also decided today that no one will be reading this novel until I edit it. So, that will probably be Christmas time.


This guy looks like a character in my novel. Minus all of the science stuff.


My main character is going to start figuring out some of the mysteries I've planned, so the next chapters should be interesting. I also really want to add a sort of funny scene, but I don't have any idea how I'd do that yet. The character in the picture above and Eli would probably be the two who have the funniest interactions. Maybe something that has to do with...oh, I can't tell you that yet.

Chazak Amats!
~Katie

Tuesday, November 13, 2012

NaNoWriMo - Day 12

Total word count: 20,815
Words written yesterday: 3,815

Things are going well at the moment. My story has sort of started to write itself. I found something interesting to put into my novel the other evening during researching and I think that's helped out a lot.

I've also discovered I have the problem of forgetting to check my chapter lengths. I just keep writing and writing and before long, I have a 6,000 word chapter. So, I've had to go back and cut down on the length.

I have some exciting news as well. I (finally) reached 100 pages/20,000 words!!

~Katie

Sunday, November 11, 2012

The Baltimore Plot

I was searching for the layout of Washington DC in 1861 this evening and I found something else.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baltimore_Plot

"The Baltimore Plot was an alleged conspiracy in late February 1861 to assassinate President-elect Abraham Lincoln en route to his inauguration. Allan Pinkerton, founder of the Pinkerton National Detective Agency, played a key role by managing Lincoln's security throughout the journey. Though scholars debate where or not the threat was real, clearly Lincoln and his advisors believed that there was a threat and took actions to ensure his safe passage through Baltimore, Maryland."

I'm thinking of incorporating this into my novel. Perhaps having my main character and the ally figure out something about the plot and try to stop the person behind it. The ally might even be related to the evil conspirator...still need to think about that.

Needless to say, I'm getting WAY more energized about my novel.

If I had more energy, I would be dancing excitedly like this alligator.

~Katie